Yes! There is not a lot of Susan&Edmund and that is why it is totally my weakness - there's a lot there to be explored, and it feels fresh and new :) and I super identify with both of them though they seem to come from opposite places and head opposite ways sometimes. Susan going from righteousness to sinning by pride; Edmund going from sinning by pride to righteous humility. Edmund repented, Susan will never repent. (and gosh thank you, it sure has been a while since Narnia fandom for me, haha)

While the Pevensies never felt like such complex characters in Lewis's work, he did often have moments where they surprised us with their insight. Like he left room for complexity. And your fic totally digs into those possibilities :D