This is good, really good. Edmund is wonderful, you really know how to write him. I liked the glimpses of his fury and how Caspian has never really seen Edmund angry (and he should be glad about that*grins*) I really wanted Ed to shout at him, tell Caspian what an idiot he was being and how he should thank his lucky stars that he would be able to live out the rest of his life in Narnia, but... The way you did it was so good. Edmund did get that across, and without raising his voice too! How very Edmund. I really liked how you made it clear that it wasn't just Aslan that chose Caspian, but Narnia too. I think that's a good detail. A very good fic and I really like it! Good job!