http://makinhistory.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] makinhistory.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] narniaexchange 2009-09-07 07:25 pm (UTC)

Ohhh, I love it! It was so perfect, the bittersweet friendship, the sense of awe about Narnia, the fading memories of England! The integration of the prompt sentence was perfectly executed, as well.

I particularly loved this:

“I am used to this place. Better than before that is. Once in awhile I may start to remember England. The memories never really seem as fantastic as my life here.”

May I reiterate - so perfect! :D

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