Oh, thank you so much! This is really lovely, and I like the different twist on their relationship, that after that initial flirtatious meeting, it becomes more cautious, more considered. It's almost like Lily is embarking on her own little quest mirroring VotDT to get to know Caspian, and it's really effective to see her learn about him through the places he has lived, that she sees the loneliness and isolation and can't leave him to that. Really nice touch to see her wanting to be part of the wildness of Narnia, as well--Bacchus' cameo was delightful!
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