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lady_songsmith ([personal profile] lady_songsmith) wrote in [community profile] narniaexchange 2011-09-10 01:01 am (UTC)

"when her hands itch for her long knife and the old bow, his sword-hand closes over hers and they are, for a moment, a king and queen in exile, and Eustace gives them their grief.
and that was when I started crying.
I love the language you have used here, practically run-on sentences, which plays up the fluidity of memory.
"Lucy knows her parents will not send her to university. If Susan, the smartest of them all, could not go to a women's college, Lucy knows her own chances."
and that was when I started crying AGAIN, because ouch and suddenly I hate Mama and Papa Pevensie. Women's colelges weren't exactly new things in the 40s, that's so mean of them.

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