Oh, this is just gorgeous. Poetry, even. Such sights and feelings captured in perfect words. And so heartbreaking that Edmund was never able to escape from the Witch outside of Aslan's Country. And it makes one wonder that if his siblings had spoke sooner he could have been freed, or if that would have only ushered the real Narnia in sooner—that he was never meant to be free from her while living and breathing. Hmmm....

This is beautiful, a pleasure to read!