Whoa, really good portray on each of the characters! Especially neat how you described how they all feel quite alone in their sorrows although they had each other. It brought a good bit of realism, because isn't that how sadness feels: you feel like you have it the worst even if you can see that others are sad too, but to you they seem to be handling it much better than the rest. Really interesting take on the Pevensie siblings! :D