ext_93626 ([identity profile] zempasuchil.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] narniaexchange 2008-11-29 04:13 am (UTC)

ahaha, this is so funny and so lovely at the same time! Edmund's father! Sports-star kings! Edmund feeling stretched thin over the worlds, can't separate his selves, gets things more mixed each time - that was my favorite part. It rings so true. how impatient it must make him, to be jerked back and forth and never let rest.

The end was lovely, though. Happy in England, without having to hide or ignore Narnia.

This was a really great neat fic.

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