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http://rthstewart.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] rthstewart.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] narniaexchange 2012-08-18 03:59 am (UTC)

I especially liked the Faun worldbuilding here with the Fatherline and backstory on Tumnus' family. Also, how Tumnus feels "the thaw trailing in her wake before anyone else." This is a wonderfully evocative phrase of the close relationship between the two of them and that he is truly the first to experience the first whiff of the Golden Age to come.

An excellent story. Thanks so much!

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