Ah, this is lovely! Thank you for expanding on Jill and Eustace's quest! The way you show us the long-term consequences of actions, as well as the immediate results, is nicely done, and you've captured the 'Lewis-voice' very well indeed (when it was appropriate). The pomposity of the Telmarine historian made me chortle! You have a good command of the various voices, actually, as, upon second look, I also really like the snippet of Edmund's letter. Congratulations! Good job, and a pleasure to read. I apologize for not commenting earlier; I've been away on holiday and am just back to the computer now.