http://nfe-gremlin.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] nfe-gremlin.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] narniaexchange2011-12-24 03:38 pm
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Worthy, for [livejournal.com profile] elenielofnarnia




Worthy, for [livejournal.com profile] elenielofnarnia.

Written by [livejournal.com profile] snitchnipped.

The first time their hands touched, it was by accident—a miscalculation of personal spaces. Jill quickly withdrew, embarrassed and unworthy. The High King neither flinched nor acknowledged it happened.

The second time—again accidentally, but she boldly refused to submit. They both had claim to that space, after all. Jill’s hand stayed, her pinky lightly grazing his, neither backing down. She stole a glance, but again, the High King paid no heed.

The third time—another accident. Her heart racing, Jill looked up to find his warm gaze. This time, Peter lovingly wrapped his hand around hers and smiled.
Original Prompt:

Jill Pole/Peter Pevensie drabble. Something where they're secretive together or unrequited and in love. You can even throw in some jealousy from Edmund and/or Eustace if you want and there's room.



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[identity profile] notoriousreign.livejournal.com 2011-12-24 10:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, I won't squeal, but I have a sudden urge to. Very nice! <3
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[personal profile] snacky 2011-12-24 11:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I loved Jill's POV here. Nicely done!
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[identity profile] harmony-lover.livejournal.com 2011-12-26 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Jill and Peter! My world is officially blown open for the day. Jill and /Peter/. I have to say I never even considered this as a 'ship. Jill is wonderful in this, definitely both sides of herself - the girl that has to get used to the Pevensies and their history, and the bold adventurer we see with Eustace.

Jill and /Peter/. Wow. :)
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[identity profile] rthstewart.livejournal.com 2011-12-29 02:58 pm (UTC)(link)
AWWWW. I don't ship them. Really I don't. But oh I could, so easily after reading something like this! Well done!
Edited 2011-12-29 14:59 (UTC)