Similies? *blushes* I'm not going back through to figure out where I used similes, but I'm very glad they worked for you.
See my reply to westingturtle for what I think about Susan.
Archenland seemed a little more formal than Narnia in THaHB, but then it's hard to have a formalized system for something like eating when you might be sharing the table with Moles or Dogs or oh, any number of animals!
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Date: 2008-12-12 06:46 am (UTC)Similies? *blushes* I'm not going back through to figure out where I used similes, but I'm very glad they worked for you.
See my reply to westingturtle for what I think about Susan.
Archenland seemed a little more formal than Narnia in THaHB, but then it's hard to have a formalized system for something like eating when you might be sharing the table with Moles or Dogs or oh, any number of animals!