Narnia Fic Challenge

You have incorporated terrific worldbuilding in this piece with the building of the Calormene mythology and pantheon. The voice is great and the sense of age and cultural history. I love the cultural aspect of the most beloved slave being sacrificed -- you can then see how the slaves compete with another, vying for the honor of being most loved by the Tisroc and sacrificed in Tash's honor. Excellent job!