Ooh, very nice. I liked the details of the first people in Calormen, and how the echoes of Frank and Helen are still there; the development of Tashbaan seems to parallel Charn, as well. Very good use of language to create such a strong sense of place. Awesome in general!
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Date: 2010-09-24 06:34 pm (UTC)