This was great. I loved the attention to details you gave the lords with things like the liver spots, the beards and hair and the way their faces had sunken in. The very tone of the story just filled me with such a pain of loss and dejection it was almost tangible. I really liked that the point of view was of Ramandu's daughter.
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Date: 2010-09-24 10:58 pm (UTC)