This is fantastic. I had intended to list out all my favorite little bits and lines but there are simply too many of them. It's so real and alive and fresh but still kind of dream-like (very much like Bacchanal, I'd have to say.)
You've done a great job of world-building here and I especially love what you've done with Susan - it's a very original treatment that I don't believe I've seen before! Well, I could gush on and on but I'll stop myself.
Thank you so much and as for With gratitude to the woman who delivered this fabulous prompt</>, it was my pleasure. :)
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Date: 2010-09-27 11:46 pm (UTC)You've done a great job of world-building here and I especially love what you've done with Susan - it's a very original treatment that I don't believe I've seen before! Well, I could gush on and on but I'll stop myself.
Thank you so much and as for With gratitude to the woman who delivered this fabulous prompt</>, it was my pleasure. :)