I really like what you've done here. I love how we get the view of Lucy going off, and the worry of her siblings. Then, suddenly, boom - Edmund is sick and in the grip of delirium. Then the return of the Witch and ice, plus fever and fire. Nice tie-up : )
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Date: 2010-10-13 08:53 am (UTC)