This was really good, can't wait to read the next part. =D I liked how you showed Susan being the only one who remembered home, it's a contrast for the future when she's the only one who doesn't remember, except it's Narnia. I also liked the things Peter said to Edmund about himself... things to think about. =]
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Date: 2011-08-18 11:41 pm (UTC)I liked how you showed Susan being the only one who remembered home, it's a contrast for the future when she's the only one who doesn't remember, except it's Narnia. I also liked the things Peter said to Edmund about himself... things to think about. =]
Okay! Moving on to the next one!