Mmmmmm, very nice. Your story feels so smooth in its seamless way of bringing their lives together in the other direction. I like this as an alternative to the train wreck and everyone ending in Narnia (sort of); at least Susan is spared the experience. It made me wince, though, the way the boys go to university and Susan & Lucy are condemned to tedium. Well written!
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branchandroot
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Date: 2011-08-24 10:17 pm (UTC)