Oh, this is beautiful - the descriptions, the vividness of Calormen, the love of the siblings and the strength of their bond, all perfect. It seems to me that Jadis in Edmund's dreams represents his memories and the lasting emotion of betraying his family, and so her presence ceases bit by bit as they forgive him - Susan out of practical understanding, Lucy out of love, Peter with authority. Very nice work.
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Date: 2011-08-31 12:07 am (UTC)