Narnia Fic Challenge

Very much so! I am just having trouble writing you any kind of useful reaction, because my reaction is basically, "Yes, this, exactly this, of course it went/would have gone like this, how else could it possibly go?" It's as if you crystallized something that was always there, waiting to be set down in the correct words -- and that is a very hard trick to pull off! So I am both impressed as a writer and beyond pleased as a reader. :-)