Narnia Fic Challenge

Thanks so much, Kate. This was (another) very personal piece for me, where I tried to write a complete story, a series of rising actions, climax, denouement, though the actual order of battle did limit me. Technically, I felt it was solid work, but I've also felt that I missed something fundamental and that I'd let readers down, reinforced by other things in the posting. So thank you for pausing in your very busy and exciting life to leave some comments. I really appreciate it so much.