I did like this a lot :) I always figured that Prunaprismia went through the door with the other Telmarines, whenever I thought about it (which wasn't often). I liked how you interspersed her thoughts with her words, showing that even while she was talking, her mind was working, weighing possibilities. Sometimes her thoughts almost conflicted with what she said aloud. Sometimes it seemed like she was just testing the waters. I thought it was very good and very enjoyable. Well done!
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Date: 2012-08-08 03:20 am (UTC)