(no subject)

Date: 2012-08-13 01:04 am (UTC)
autumnia: The apple orchard in Cair Paravel (Pevensies (at the Cair))
From: [personal profile] autumnia
Loved this a lot -- there's a lot of history-building here and I like how you presented it, as a history lesson/bedtime story to the young Prince (and I love the details you have here about Rilian as well, how his first betrothed had marry during his captivity and then how Rilian himself had a mistress who also bore him another child). What's great here is that you have Col breaking ties with his family all because he had a woman in his group of confidantes and warriors. And I LOVE that he did not treat her any differently than his male friends and he accepted her as an equal.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting
Page generated Jun. 10th, 2025 05:44 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios