Wow. I really liked what you did with Tumnus here - framing the story with tears and anger and the cold, while in between we have the thaw that Lucy brought to both Narnia and his heart.
But I also love how you wrote the Witch - I feel like you really captured that terror she instills in the Narnians. Those parts had me squirming! Very well done!
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Date: 2012-08-21 02:01 am (UTC)But I also love how you wrote the Witch - I feel like you really captured that terror she instills in the Narnians. Those parts had me squirming! Very well done!