Ah, this is lovely! I'm a sucker for anything to do with Jill, and you've crafted a beautiful character study here. You handled her uncertainties and self-doubts with so much grace, and I especially love how you resolved her worries about her mother. Your Puddlegum is absolutely charming, too - he must have been a blast to write!
I'm a huge sucker for constellation stories and stargazing as a trope, and you integrated that wonderfully into the plot here, as well. Well done, and thank you for writing!
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Date: 2013-09-07 02:54 am (UTC)I'm a huge sucker for constellation stories and stargazing as a trope, and you integrated that wonderfully into the plot here, as well. Well done, and thank you for writing!