Oh, what a wonderful story of Tashbaan! I love how you told it as great tale with the narrator the city itself, and the description and the idea of the Tisroc sacrificing a beloved slave were very cool bits.
It reminds me a little of Neil Gaiman's Sandman, particularly "A Tale of Two Cities" and "Ramadan." Very cool.
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Date: 2010-09-23 10:26 pm (UTC)It reminds me a little of Neil Gaiman's Sandman, particularly "A Tale of Two Cities" and "Ramadan." Very cool.