I WANT TO ROLL AROUND IN THIS FIC FOREVER AND HOLD IT CLOSE.
Errr, omg. This fic is so beautifully poetic and gorgeous and evocative and all the adjectives in the world that mean: WHAT A WONDERFUL PIECE OF POETIC FICTION. Well done, author! Well done.
I loved the use of color and then the tease of Narnia in this: "See the different colours of the endless plains: the green of the Empire's farmland, the blue of the Ocean, the yellow of the Desert, where many a barbarian and wild beast has met their fate, fleeing the Sorceress of the Cold North."
And from "I am the slave digging sewers in the streets" to the end, I was completely and utterly spellbound. Loved this!!!
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Date: 2010-09-26 05:21 pm (UTC)Errr, omg. This fic is so beautifully poetic and gorgeous and evocative and all the adjectives in the world that mean: WHAT A WONDERFUL PIECE OF POETIC FICTION. Well done, author! Well done.
I loved the use of color and then the tease of Narnia in this: "See the different colours of the endless plains: the green of the Empire's farmland, the blue of the Ocean, the yellow of the Desert, where many a barbarian and wild beast has met their fate, fleeing the Sorceress of the Cold North."
And from "I am the slave digging sewers in the streets" to the end, I was completely and utterly spellbound. Loved this!!!