Narnia Fic Challenge

Oh, this is lovely! The Lords' hesitation, their confusion -- and then their shock at finding out that Aslan is real, and their bitterness of living half lives. So very IC for the Telmarines! And Rhoop, whose sadness is still there, as if he feels that he was woken up too soon. And I adore the fact that you wrote it from the POV of Ramandu's daughter -- and the hints of her own longings.

Thank you so much, mystery writer! This is a treat.