This is without a doubt the best Eustace/Jill fic I have ever read. It's so so good. Your characterisation of everyone is spot on and brilliant.
I loved the glimpses of the Pevensies grown up and happy. Lucy in trousers is my new favourite thing ever. There needs to be fanart!
This whole fic is lovely. Scrubb and Pole not being able to sleep separate is so great, and not completely unthinkable. (This is also one of my favourite tropes by the way. So extra yay!)
I'm so happy that you gave us closure here. That you let them figure themselves out and who they are. That you didn't stop this either before they "grew up" or that you didn't let them have any resolution before they died. That would have been so frustrating and I'm so happy you didn't! The kiss was lovely and had be smiling like a lunatic.
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Date: 2010-09-26 12:00 am (UTC)I loved the glimpses of the Pevensies grown up and happy. Lucy in trousers is my new favourite thing ever. There needs to be fanart!
This whole fic is lovely. Scrubb and Pole not being able to sleep separate is so great, and not completely unthinkable. (This is also one of my favourite tropes by the way. So extra yay!)
I'm so happy that you gave us closure here. That you let them figure themselves out and who they are. That you didn't stop this either before they "grew up" or that you didn't let them have any resolution before they died. That would have been so frustrating and I'm so happy you didn't! The kiss was lovely and had be smiling like a lunatic.
SO MUCH KUDOS TO YOU! THIS IS GREAT!