How cool is this story! I loved that Susan is written not as the Gentle Queen we think her to be, not as a side character but a True Queen who can rule and command in her own right. She is strong, in control and confident in securing her kingdom even if she yearns for her family. And you wrote her as a Knight! How awesome!
Oh dear Edmund, ten years gone and you're still tormented by the Witch. She can't have you, she will never have you. You are your family's, you are Narnia's and you are Aslan's.
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Date: 2010-09-28 11:34 pm (UTC)Oh dear Edmund, ten years gone and you're still tormented by the Witch. She can't have you, she will never have you. You are your family's, you are Narnia's and you are Aslan's.
Excellent, excellent story.