Yay, thank you, anon, for a wonderful fill of my prompt :D
I loved the look into Peter's head, how desperate he still is to do right by Aslan but without any idea how to. The little touch of Susan in the dream was lovely--she's coming after them, but her route may take a little longer before she gets there too.
The extra little details of the Varsity Line and Mrs Bryce rambling on about her family really made it shine and the whole thing felt wonderfully canon.
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Date: 2010-10-05 06:08 am (UTC)I loved the look into Peter's head, how desperate he still is to do right by Aslan but without any idea how to. The little touch of Susan in the dream was lovely--she's coming after them, but her route may take a little longer before she gets there too.
The extra little details of the Varsity Line and Mrs Bryce rambling on about her family really made it shine and the whole thing felt wonderfully canon.
Exactly what I was hoping for! ILU so hard.
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