I really like this post-Narnia Edmund; I think it makes a lot of sense that he would, in returning to his child's body and life, return to some degree to his old behavior, or at least think/fear that he has. It's one of those character ideas that makes so much since now you've written it that I don't see why it hasn't been done like this and this well in every Edmund-post-Narnia fic :)
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Date: 2011-08-28 03:00 am (UTC)