I love Susan rescuing Edmund, and Edmund easily and cheerfully acknowledging that she did a better and cleaner job of it than he would have done if their positions were reversed. :-D I also like how you developed the Marsh-Wiggles, and how pacifist they are even after Blackpond's incitement. The connection to the Lady of the Green Kirtle was really well done, as was Susan solving the problem by remembering stories of Koschei the Deathless (or some other variation on the evil wizard).
The little touches like Narnia finally being at peace five years after the Winter's end, Susan's suspicion that the Wiggles were suborned rather than enchanted (while Edmund, for personal reasons, I assume, gives them the benefit of the doubt), the way Susan has a chance of passing for a Wiggle in the dark where a squirrel, a dwarf, and a centaur can't (which is such a very Narnian problem), are all lovely.
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Date: 2011-08-30 04:03 am (UTC)The little touches like Narnia finally being at peace five years after the Winter's end, Susan's suspicion that the Wiggles were suborned rather than enchanted (while Edmund, for personal reasons, I assume, gives them the benefit of the doubt), the way Susan has a chance of passing for a Wiggle in the dark where a squirrel, a dwarf, and a centaur can't (which is such a very Narnian problem), are all lovely.