Narnia Fic Challenge

oooh, this is *beautiful*. I love all the things not said. Your characterizations seem spot-on but more realistic, grown up, than their young selves we see in the books and movies - how Edmund is not just sneaky but secretive - but they're still playful - Peter's comment to Edmund, "They'll never love you" made me laugh! :D - and how the Galmans aren't just adoring - it makes complete sense, really. your details! drawing escape routes, wrapping in silks, spiky fruit, black braids! so rich, so pretty. I imagine this whole piece in different shades of gold. thank you!