Big Bang Fic: Rat and Sword Go To War

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Title: Rat and Sword Go To War
Author: rthstewart
Rating: T, for a soldier's salty language
Pairings/characters: Peter Pevensie, Susan Pevensie
Disclaimer: This work of historical fiction is offered respectfully and with deep admiration for the men and women herein depicted as well as C.S. Lewis and the other content owners of the Chronicles of Narnia and its related properties. Any original content in this derivative fiction is in the public domain and may be used freely and without notice to me or attribution.
Possible Spoilers/Warnings: All of The Chronicles of Narnia.
Summary: The High King and the Gentle Queen go to war, again.

Introduction
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3 Part 1 Part 2
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6 Part 1 Part 2

Comments

[rthstewart.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much. I so appreciate you reading and reviewing. I've been feeling very down about the story, that I really missed something essential and so I hugely value hearing from folks. Edmund was one of those additions that didn't really have to be there, but once I fiddled with it, it just had to be there. Snacky talked me out of having Susan pretend to be pregnant the whole time she was in France. The LZs I did not know until I was writing that scene and realized it. In fact, I didn't know about Sword Beach until someone mentioned it in a review when I suggested in AW that Peter would be joining the 6th Airborne and the Oxs & Bucks. I had just liked the paras' shoulder flash of Pegasus/Fledge.

Anyway, thank you very, very much.