Narnia Fic Challenge

Brilliant. Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant. You exactly capture the tone of Old Tales- legends and the like- and the pitch is perfect. It's a lovely tale, too, blending history and myth and love and betrayal into a perfect mixture that is both a perfect bedtime tale and a lesson. It works wonderfully, too, that Archenland claims the only true descent from the 'First Men;' thank you so, so much for sharing.