First off, THANK YOU for having Susan want to go to war with her siblings. That part of HHB always bothered me… she with her perfectly good bow and all!
The dialogue between Lewis' original and yours was seamless, as was your interpretation of their motivations. And it was great getting first person account of the battle… I always thought Lewis copped out on that!
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Date: 2012-09-08 04:37 am (UTC)The dialogue between Lewis' original and yours was seamless, as was your interpretation of their motivations. And it was great getting first person account of the battle… I always thought Lewis copped out on that!
And ha! Spikey boots!
Thanks for writing!