Between Sleeping and Waking - for [livejournal.com profile] elenielofnarnia

Aug. 23rd, 2011 05:28 pm
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Title: Between Sleeping and Waking
Author: [livejournal.com profile] metonomia
Recipient: [livejournal.com profile] elenielofnarnia
Rating: PG
Possible Spoilers/Warnings: Minor spoilers for The Magician's Nephew
Summary: The Wood Between Worlds is more than just a wood.
Notes: This fell away from the original prompt a fair amount, but I tried to keep to the spirit of what you wanted, and I hope it is enjoyable all the same!



In another world, a world between worlds, there is a wood. It is appears infinite, but comfortably so, silent and golden green, a wood that is the essence of a wood.

There is in the wood a girl, who has been there forever - however long that is - and who thinks she might be a tree of sorts herself. There are many kinds here, after all, growing up strong or weak or pale or dark from their different pools of water, and only at the level of foliage twisting together into one mass of indiscernible trees. She has seen trees of wild colors and some not of wood at all, and once, one that seemed to be made of water, spiralling up from its pool in a silent geyser. Still, it is a wood, and all in it are trees. She drinks from the pool she has sat beside since she can remember, and the light that filters down through the leaves warms her and nourishes her; she can feel it passing through her skin and into her bloodstream, some strange photosynthesis boiling sun into blood and sugars. So she is a tree, and she sits with the patience of one, moving only to bend herself in the direction of the light.

She waits.

The wood is waiting with her; their silence is a sleep, though she has never closed her eyes here. Something is missing, but it is too much trouble to think what. Stillness is the only cure for what has been hurt in them, though she thinks - she remembers, perhaps - that both she and the wood are not meant to be still. She remembers constant, incandescent motion, remembers feeling that if she ever stopped she’d never start up again - but that cannot be, for she has been here forever.

There is noise, loud and discordant, and it should be wrong but the girl and the wood lean toward it, welcome it. She watches in languid interest as a blue box materializes a few yards away, settling itself into the wood as if it belongs. For a moment the silence returns, but now it is alive, a bated breath rather than a stupor.

They do not have much longer to wait.

The door of the strange blue box opens, and a man and a woman step out, speaking animatedly; they do not notice her, and after so much quiet she does not yet want to speak.

“Oh, brilliant,” the man breathes, spinning about and dashing into the woods a ways, calling back to the woman, “I knew it, as soon as you mentioned your Wood, I knew it was a TARDIS, Polly.”

But the woman does not seem to hear him, and the girl knows that this Polly has belonged to the wood.

“Oh, this is gorgeous,” the man prattles on, peering up into the leaves and into the pools of water. “Best design I’ve seen in ages, very clever, you!” He shouts to the wood, and the girl feels it coursing with pride, bathing in the attention for which it has been waiting. She waited for attention, once. She needed help, and no one gave it.

“But, Doctor,” the woman named Polly has wandered over to him, and in the few moments she has been in the wood, she has grown younger, sharper. “It’s a bit...broken, isn’t it? I mean, there aren’t any controls, we just stumbled around and guessed, before.”

“You had those clever rings, didn’t you?” She makes a face, and he clicks his tongue in disapproval.

“He was no Time Lord, but I do admire that Andrew fellow,” he says, and it has the air of an old debate. “So little knowledge, but the intuition! This beauty’s been abandoned - the wood is some form of stasis, see, she’s making herself available even without a pilot - but he managed to figure out she was here, even if he didn’t know what he’d found. Atlantean dust, phah! It was rift-energy, and he - well, he qualified it, I suppose. Very clever.”

“The man was a fool, and a dangerous one at that,” Polly says unforgivingly, but she is staring down into a pool marked by an old scuff-mark, some memory taking the edge off her words.

“She is rather limited,” the Doctor frowns, pulling out a strange instrument and waving it haphazardly through the air. “The time function is held in some sort of stasis, like it’s been looped into the TARDIS herself, and only the space is fluid - “

“Literally,” Polly giggles a bit. It’s a nice sound, one the girl suddenly finds she misses. There was someone she used to laugh with, before.

“Yes, and - hello!” The Doctor spins about again and finally sees the girl. “Are you her? A strange manifestation, but if she needed a - a gardener, or - no, you just got sucked in somehow, hmm? The rift in your universe, maybe. A flaw in the stasis model, you must have been stuck here for some time.”

“Oh, hush,” Polly tells him, and sits down next to the girl. “I know it leaves you a bit muddled,” she says, “but talking helped me; you’ll remember in a minute, and we can get you where you need to go. If you haven’t moved much, this is probably even your pool right here.”

“Hello,” she says, and words have always been her undoing, and she remembers now. So many words, broken promises and challenges and curses. No one ever listened to her. But the wood likes these two, and she is done with waiting. She has not been here forever, and it is not her home, but her refuge, her last flight. They must think her destroyed, or trapped, but this Doctor and Polly have some odd magic; they can return her.

“My name is Morgana,” she tells them, “and I have a rebellion to get back to, if you don’t mind directing me to Camelot.” Her eyes flash gold, and she stands up.




Original Prompt that we sent you: What I want: Set in the Golden Age, a mysterious figure comes up to the Kings and Queens and asks for help, but they don't know if this person is telling the truth about the trouble they're in. Or: Crossover with either Doctor Who, BBC's Merlin or Robin Hood, Harry Potter, or Game of Thrones, it's the author's choice. Set during Caspian's reign or the Golden Age (again, the author's choice), a character from one of the other fandoms pays Cair Paravel a visit.
Prompt words/objects/quotes/whatever: "He/she is quite... gruesome-looking." (Said by any one of the Pevensies) Crossover: "Help is needed, but not from a boy".

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Date: 2011-08-23 10:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] linneasr.livejournal.com
What a very sophisticated merging of these three stories! Seeing that the Wood is a type of Tardis is brilliant! You've done a superb job handling the concepts, and you capture the languid afternoon atmosphere of the Wood so well! Also the effect it has on people - interesting that it both imposes a sort of pause and wakes Polly up. I'm very impressed.

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Date: 2011-09-08 10:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] metonomia.livejournal.com
:D Thank you!

I've actually been waiting to use the TARDIS idea for a while, so having it work out here was really fun. I'm glad it worked for you!

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Date: 2011-08-23 10:53 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] edenfalling
Now that is interesting. The Wood as a TARDIS -- it's a sideways leap that, once you get over the surprise, makes perfect sense. I like the Doctor and Polly arguing about Uncle Andrew (because yeah, the Doctor would admire his ingenuity). And then the girl turns out to be Morgana! How fascinating; I had half thought she would be Susan, having used the rings after her family's deaths, and then there would be awkward temporal paradoxes to negotiate with Polly. But Morgana drifting calmly in stasis, waking not to hope but to vengeance, is another of those surprises that fits beautifully on second thought.

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Date: 2011-09-08 10:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] metonomia.livejournal.com
<33 Thanks! I've been waiting to use this idea for a while, and I'm glad to hear it both surprises and makes sense. And thank you for being surprised by Morgana as well :D I was hoping it would seem like Susan or someone else from Narnia.

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Date: 2011-08-24 12:14 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rthstewart.livejournal.com
The Wood as a Tardis! What a wonderful idea! Then, we have poor, sad, forgotten Morgana! There are so much possibilities here! I really wanted Polly and the Doctor to take the "Tardis" on to Narnia!!! The Doctor's musings on Andrew were also just terrific -- intuition but no knowledge. Well done mystery writer!

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Date: 2011-09-08 10:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] metonomia.livejournal.com
<3333

Thank you, darling! I wish I'd had more time, because I would have loved to extend Polly and the Doctor's side of things, but I had fun with this.

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Date: 2011-08-24 05:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snitchnipped.livejournal.com
I have never even considered Who/Narnia crossovers, and now this is the second on in the NFE and I am in LOVE with the idea. And Polly! Of course, Polly and the Doctor, it's perfect! Such a great take on the Wood, too, which you'd think more people would write about (talk about infinite story possibilities). Thank you for this!

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Date: 2011-09-08 10:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] metonomia.livejournal.com
Narnia/Who is one of my FAVORITE crossovers, oh man.

LET ME REC YOU SOME MORE!
Besides ilysia's wonderful one from this NFE, we have:
http://xover-exchange.livejournal.com/4279.html
and
http://be-themoon.livejournal.com/42337.html
and, if you watch Torchwood,
http://be-themoon.livejournal.com/83120.html

and then
http://wingedflight21.dreamwidth.org/5049.html

And thank you for the comment!

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Date: 2011-08-24 03:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ilysia-039.livejournal.com
Oh, this is very clever. I do love the merging of the three universes and, even though I'm not familiar with BBC's Merlin, they all fit together beautifully, don't they? And the Woods as a TARDIS! I love it!

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Date: 2011-09-08 10:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] metonomia.livejournal.com
<333 Thank you!

TBH, in retrospect I might have not had it be Morgana. But I didn't want it to be Susan, and I love Morgana, and I thought it sort of fit well not just with the BBC show but with the Morgan le Fay legend in general to have her in exile there.

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Date: 2011-08-24 11:04 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] lady_songsmith
yes, but... but... WHERE'S THE REST? *hunts under stones and around 404s* This is brilliant -- now tell us MOAR!

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Date: 2011-09-08 10:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] metonomia.livejournal.com
<3333

I do wish I'd had more, but alas it was late and I'd just changed the whole direction of it.

Maybe I'll do more of Polly and the Doctor's adventures sometime!

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Date: 2011-08-26 03:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] animus-wyrmis.livejournal.com
Hee! That was loads of fun, and I love the idea of Polly as a companion and the Wood as a TARDIS.

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Date: 2011-08-26 04:18 pm (UTC)
snacky: (narnia Lucy by Cliodna)
From: [personal profile] snacky
What a clever idea, having the Wood be a Tardis, and Polly one of the Doctor's companions. And nice cameo by Morgana.

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Date: 2011-08-27 10:36 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] notoriousreign.livejournal.com
This is definitely different, but in a good way. I quite liked this! Having the Wood be a Tardis and even Morgana's appearance at the end! Who/Narnia is slowly becoming more and more awesome to me. xD Awesome job!

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Date: 2011-09-09 06:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] metonomia.livejournal.com
Aww, thanks! I was worried when I started drifting so far away from your prompt, but I had fun with the idea and I'm glad it worked for you!

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Date: 2011-09-03 01:27 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wingedflight21.livejournal.com
Oh, of COURSE the wood is a TARDIS! That is such a brilliant idea, and the writing fits the mood of the wood perfectly. Great job!

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Date: 2011-12-03 11:04 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] harmony-lover.livejournal.com
This is amazing. I have to catch up on Dr. Who, I really do (although when that's to happen, when my writing has come to a standstill and I'm behind even in my regular fandoms, I don't know). But the woods as a TARDIS! Brilliant. Really, really brilliant, and I love the Dr.'s thoughts about Uncle Andrew - and Polly's sharp reminder of the consequences of Uncle Andrew's "ingenuity." Very, very interesting - and I too, would love to read more. :)
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