The First Yule, for [livejournal.com profile] unsuitenedt

Dec. 24th, 2011 03:39 pm
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The First Yule, for [livejournal.com profile] unsuitenedt.

Written by [livejournal.com profile] lady_songsmith.


Peter stretches his booted toes toward the roaring bonfire. Across the clearing, a laughing Edmund is borne to the ground under a squirming tumble of Dogs, and Lucy stalks Father Christmas, her gift for him clasped tight in her hand. Susan, exhausted by endless dances, rests against his left side. He frees the arm to wrap around her, along with a swath of cloak, and she leans into him gladly. The scent of spruce tickles his nose from the wreath they crowned her with. Peter tips his head back, almost upsetting his own holly, and watches the stars dance too.
Original Prompt:

Something happy and Christmassy, involving one or more of the Pevensies (especially love Peter and Susan), Narnia or England, book or movie-inspired... Frost, snow, hot drinks, open fires (mix & match as you like!)... Alternatively, if Pevensies aren't your thing, I'd love anything Christmassy with Caspian and/or Tirian as well.



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Date: 2011-12-24 11:07 pm (UTC)
vialethe: (Narnia)
From: [personal profile] vialethe
This is beautiful, and I love all the details - Lucy with her gift for Father Christmas, the wreaths, everyone dancing. It's so lovely and happy!!

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Date: 2011-12-24 11:36 pm (UTC)
snacky: (narnia lucy the valiant)
From: [personal profile] snacky
What a lovely glimpse into a Narnian Christmas! I really like all the sensory details.

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Date: 2011-12-24 11:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unsuitenedt.livejournal.com
Aww, I love this! It is so sweet and full of contentment. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

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Date: 2011-12-26 09:49 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] harmony-lover.livejournal.com
Gorgeous! Narnian Christmas always makes me feel so warm, and this is just full of little details - the holly wreaths, the snow, the bonfires, the laughter and hugs and happiness. Thank you for such a lovely little glimpse of Yuletide in Narnia.

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Date: 2011-12-29 02:57 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rthstewart.livejournal.com
Love Lucy stalking Father Christmas and Peter with a wreath of holly. It's great when Edmund is happy at Christmas too. Well done!
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