Thank you so much. I so appreciate you reading and reviewing. I've been feeling very down about the story, that I really missed something essential and so I hugely value hearing from folks. Edmund was one of those additions that didn't really have to be there, but once I fiddled with it, it just had to be there. Snacky talked me out of having Susan pretend to be pregnant the whole time she was in France. The LZs I did not know until I was writing that scene and realized it. In fact, I didn't know about Sword Beach until someone mentioned it in a review when I suggested in AW that Peter would be joining the 6th Airborne and the Oxs & Bucks. I had just liked the paras' shoulder flash of Pegasus/Fledge.
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branchandroot
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Date: 2012-04-10 12:43 am (UTC)Anyway, thank you very, very much.